Jun 17, 17 / Leo 00, 01 01:53 UTC
Small mistakes in English version of constitution ¶
To whom it may concern,
Hi, my name is Paul Newton and I am proudly a citizen of Asgardia, upon reading the English version of the proposed constitution, prior to accepting it I have noticed a few things that require amendment, firstly well done on such an extensive, all encompassing and wordy document.
It may just seem like nit picking and may possibly have been addressed by other citizens but,
In article 8, section 4, F. There is no need for the second "to" in the sentence "right to access to information", right of access to information, or right to access information would be sufficient.
Article 8, section 9. Is missing the letter "p" in "protect".
Article, 35 section 9. It is not clear what is meant by "shall not to be replaced".
Article 48. There is a missing "t" in the word "parliament".
I look forward to your response and seeing the continued prosperity and expansion of the great kingdom of Asgardia.
Sorry for the repost but I just realised that I posted the original in an unrelated forum.